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I’ve decided to try out this weekly thing called Flash Friday Fiction, where you write a post based on the photo provided that is 100 words. I just couldn’t keep it at 100 words, I tried but couldn’t get my mind’s vision down to just 100 words. Click on the banner to join in or see what others’ takes were on this photo!

I saw her last Halloween in my neighbor’s window. Naked and beautiful, only a whisper of presence. She looked at me; once she knew she had an audience she touched herself seductively. But she was gone soon; I thought perhaps I imagined it.
This year she proved me wrong. This year she was in MY house. I watched, aroused, as she continued her show from last year. Floating mid-air, reclining as if she were on a bed, she began to masturbate for me. As her pace increased she became more opaque; she glowed. Her silent climax ended with a burst of light and heat.
I couldn’t see her anymore but I still felt her presence. I disrobed and mimicked her actions. As I climbed to my own orgasm I felt her – cool purposeful caresses across my breasts and cunt. As I climaxed I could swear I felt the pressure of a another person on me and in me.
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5 Responses to “FlashFictionFriday: Ethereal Exhibitionist”


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October 30th, 2009 at 4:37 pm
Hey, how nice to see you joining in the fun. I liked this tale; thanks for sharing it! I think you’ll enjoy the intellectual exercise. :)
– PB
October 30th, 2009 at 5:52 pm
that really would make for a happy hallowe’en!
just imagine the demand for a house that was haunted by a ghost
like that!
October 30th, 2009 at 8:20 pm
Hi there,
Another first time Flash Fiction scribe!!
Oh boy, I spent a good while on 102 words scribbling away trying to stream line my thoughts without compromising what it was that I wanted to say. Was fun though. Next effort will depend on the photo though lol.
Your fiction was a great read so well done!!
October 31st, 2009 at 10:34 am
Excuse me while I go masturbate.
November 1st, 2009 at 5:35 pm
I wouldn’t mind that kind of paranormal activity…